Here is some Writing I thought you might want to see, I hope you enjoy it!
WALT; write a non chronological report
Remember to use:
- an opening paragraph explain what your report is about.
- headings and subheadings for the main body.
- an closing paragraph, recapping on what you have written.
- Pictures, maps etc with captions to explain what they are.
Remember to use faction not opinions.
The Mighty Gorilla
Gorillas are animals that mainly live in regions of dense forests in tropical Africa, such as Rwanda. Few animals have sparked the imagination of man as much as the gorilla, the biggest of the living primates and the last member of the ape family.
What do Gorillas look like?
The gorilla is huge, with muscular chest and shoulders. The arms are longer than the little legs. A fully grown male mountain gorilla is twice as large as the female.
What do they eat?
Most gorillas are herbivores which means they eat vegetables and herbs for their breakfast, lunch and dinner. Male gorillas can eat up to 20kg of food each day, that's more half a child’s own body weight.
Where do they live?
Habitat. Mountain gorillas live in Rwanda, Ugandaand the Democratic Republic of the Congo, on green, volcanic mountains. Lowland gorillas live in the forests of central and western Africa in Equatorial Guinea, Angola, Cameroon, the Central African Republic, Congo, Gabon and the Democratic Republic of the Congo
Concluding Paragraph
I think gorillas are one of the most amazing animals in the world first of all because they are endangered and very special and humans have a great responsibility to look after them.
Hi Leo my name is Denzel and I go to Kawakawa Primary School. I never new that there were mighty gorillas. I really how you set out your work and how you put a bright colour so everyone can see it. It is cool where they live and what they eat. If you want to check out mine go to kpsdenzels.blogspot
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